简答题
英语四级
2017-05-18
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Risks of Fresh University Graduates' Self-Employment based on the statistics provided in the chart below. Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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答案解析
审题立意
1．导语解读：要求考生根据图表的内容就“应届大学毕业生创业风险”这一话题进行简述，并对此做出评论。
2．文章立意：应届大学毕业生自主创业有诸多风险，每种风险都有它存在的内在原因，想要创业的应届大学生应考虑周全而为之。
写作思路
1．第一段为开篇段落，简要描述图表，引出应届大学生自主创业存在的各种风险。
2．第二段为主体段落，结合图表分析存在这些风险的原因。
3．第三段为结尾段落，总结全文，提出观点。
参考范文
On the Risks of Fresh University Graduates' Self-Employment
This bar chart provides some data regarding the risks of fresh university graduates' self-employment. As listed in this chart, the most serious risk is lack of fund, which is as high as 31%1 Difficulty in marketing and lack of experience in business management rank the second and the third, accounting for 25% and 20% respectively.1 Besides, there are also some other risks, such as inadequate technological expertise, etc.1
As for the top three risks, they all have their own reasons. First of all1, newly graduated students don't have enough startup capital1, which generally comes from their parents. It is difficult to get bank loan and venture investment. Secondly2, campus is usually called ivory tower, in which students develop few social connections. This increases the difficulty of marketing. In the end2, what university students have learned is mostly book learning and they are short of practical experience. However, during the startup stage, business experience largely outweighs book learning.
In summary, there are potential risks in fresh university graduates' self-employment. Therefore, those who want to start a business should think carefully before action.3
范文译文
应届大学毕业生自主创业的风险
这个柱状图提供了一些有关应届大学毕业生创业风险的数据。正如图表所示，最大的风险是缺乏资金，在所有风险中比例高达31％。市场推广困难和缺乏管理经验位列第二和第三位，分别占25％和20％。此外，还有一些其他风险，如技术知识不够等。对于排名靠前的三种风险，它们的存在各有原因。首先，刚毕业的大学生没有足够的创业资金，他们的创业资金通常来自父母的资助。获得银行贷款和风险投资较难。其次，大学校园通常被称为象牙塔，学生在校园里几乎没有什么社会关系，这加大了市场推广的难度。最后，大学生学到的多是书本知识，缺乏实践经验。然而，在创业阶段，实践经验比书本知识重要得多。
总之，应届大学毕业生自主创业存在潜在的风险，因此，想要自主创业的应届大学毕业生在行动之前应考虑周全。
范文点评
1．开篇运用多种表达方式简要描述图表的内容。
2．针对首段提到的排名靠前的三种风险，分别给出原因，分析透彻、阐述清晰。
3．末段总结全文，提出观点：想要自主创业的应届大学毕业生在行动之前应考虑周全。
要点用法
regarding prep．关于
self-employment n．自主创业
lackof缺少
startup capital创业资金
outweigh v．比……重要
flesh university graduates应届大学毕业生
fund，n．资金
venture investment风险投资
句法点评
1．As listed in this chart,the most serious risk is lack of fund,which is as high as 31％．
本句句首为描述图表内容时的常用句型，类似的表达方式还有As can be cleadv seen flom the chart等。
2．Ill the end．what university students have learned is mostly book learning and they are short of practical experience．
此处使用Twhat弓I导的主语从句，引导词what在主语从句中作宾语。
3．Therefore，those who want to start a business should think carefully before action．
关系代词who引导定语从句，修饰those，此处those指代those flesh university graduates。
1．导语解读：要求考生根据图表的内容就“应届大学毕业生创业风险”这一话题进行简述，并对此做出评论。
2．文章立意：应届大学毕业生自主创业有诸多风险，每种风险都有它存在的内在原因，想要创业的应届大学生应考虑周全而为之。
写作思路
1．第一段为开篇段落，简要描述图表，引出应届大学生自主创业存在的各种风险。
2．第二段为主体段落，结合图表分析存在这些风险的原因。
3．第三段为结尾段落，总结全文，提出观点。
参考范文
On the Risks of Fresh University Graduates' Self-Employment
This bar chart provides some data regarding the risks of fresh university graduates' self-employment. As listed in this chart, the most serious risk is lack of fund, which is as high as 31%1 Difficulty in marketing and lack of experience in business management rank the second and the third, accounting for 25% and 20% respectively.1 Besides, there are also some other risks, such as inadequate technological expertise, etc.1
As for the top three risks, they all have their own reasons. First of all1, newly graduated students don't have enough startup capital1, which generally comes from their parents. It is difficult to get bank loan and venture investment. Secondly2, campus is usually called ivory tower, in which students develop few social connections. This increases the difficulty of marketing. In the end2, what university students have learned is mostly book learning and they are short of practical experience. However, during the startup stage, business experience largely outweighs book learning.
In summary, there are potential risks in fresh university graduates' self-employment. Therefore, those who want to start a business should think carefully before action.3
范文译文
应届大学毕业生自主创业的风险
这个柱状图提供了一些有关应届大学毕业生创业风险的数据。正如图表所示，最大的风险是缺乏资金，在所有风险中比例高达31％。市场推广困难和缺乏管理经验位列第二和第三位，分别占25％和20％。此外，还有一些其他风险，如技术知识不够等。对于排名靠前的三种风险，它们的存在各有原因。首先，刚毕业的大学生没有足够的创业资金，他们的创业资金通常来自父母的资助。获得银行贷款和风险投资较难。其次，大学校园通常被称为象牙塔，学生在校园里几乎没有什么社会关系，这加大了市场推广的难度。最后，大学生学到的多是书本知识，缺乏实践经验。然而，在创业阶段，实践经验比书本知识重要得多。
总之，应届大学毕业生自主创业存在潜在的风险，因此，想要自主创业的应届大学毕业生在行动之前应考虑周全。
范文点评
1．开篇运用多种表达方式简要描述图表的内容。
2．针对首段提到的排名靠前的三种风险，分别给出原因，分析透彻、阐述清晰。
3．末段总结全文，提出观点：想要自主创业的应届大学毕业生在行动之前应考虑周全。
要点用法
regarding prep．关于
self-employment n．自主创业
lackof缺少
startup capital创业资金
outweigh v．比……重要
flesh university graduates应届大学毕业生
fund，n．资金
venture investment风险投资
句法点评
1．As listed in this chart,the most serious risk is lack of fund,which is as high as 31％．
本句句首为描述图表内容时的常用句型，类似的表达方式还有As can be cleadv seen flom the chart等。
2．Ill the end．what university students have learned is mostly book learning and they are short of practical experience．
此处使用Twhat弓I导的主语从句，引导词what在主语从句中作宾语。
3．Therefore，those who want to start a business should think carefully before action．
关系代词who引导定语从句，修饰those，此处those指代those flesh university graduates。
