写作思路
第一段：表明你眼中最好的方式。
第二段：用一两个原因和例子来支撑自己的观点。
第三段：自然地得出结论，收尾。
范文及高分点评
My Opinions on Students' Wearing Famous Brand
(1) On campus, we can often see some students wearing famous brand clothes, shoes. And why are they fond of famous brand?
Those students desire to (2) keep track of what brand is trendy. (3) For one thing, in their eyes, famous brand is the symbol of sophistication. By showing off their
famous brand gear, they expect others to admire their high class and good taste. For another, they don' t pay any attention to their behaviour and courtesy. (4) They mistakenly think that they can buy good taste and high quality
with money.
In my opinion, good taste can' t be bought, and wearing famous brands doesn't make a person high class. Noble character (5)is superior to superficial ornamentation
and flashy surface. (6) I would like to suggest that these students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character. (7) This is the only way they can acquire good taste.
(1)文章开头提到当今社会存在的现象．引出文章话题：Why are they fond of famous brand?
(2)keep track of意为“记录；跟踪”。
(3)文章第二段用到For one thing…For another这一句型，清晰地阐述了学生追求名牌的两大原因。
(4)此处用了一个宾语从句。mistakenly意为“错误地”。
(5)be superior to意为“优于……”。
(6)I would like to suggest that…表示委婉的建议。
(7)结尾再次强调作者自己的观点：塑造良好的个性最重要。
闪光词汇
keep track of… 记录；跟踪
mistakenly adv．错误地
superficial adj．肤浅的，外表的
ornamentation n．装饰物．装饰
万能句型
For one thing…for another… 一方面……，另一方面……
I would like to suggest that… 我建议……