写作思路
第一段：指出社会现状，引出话题，并陈述自己的观点。
第二段：分两点来论证，支撑自己的观点。
第三段：再次强调自己的观点并结尾。
范文及高分点评
Are Western Festivals Undermining
Chinese Culture?
In recent years, more and more young people (1) have been fascinated to celebrate western festivals, and many young people don't remember traditional Chinese festivals. So some people worry that western festivals are (2) undermining Chinese culture. (3) But in my opinion, this will not happen.
I believe that Chinese culture will be kept well,(4) First, young people like to celebrate western festivals just because these festivals are interesting. When they
(5) get used to them, they will lose their interest in them. While the traditional Chinese festivals will be celebrated for it's our own culture. Second, our country has set these traditional Chinese festivals as legal holidays (6) so that people can have several days off. People, especially young ones, like to have holidays on which they don' t need to go to school or work.
(7) In one word, western festivals will not under-mine Chinese culture, but just add some fun into our daily lives.
(1)be fascinated to意为“着迷于……，沉醉于……”。
(2)undermine意为“破坏”。
(3)文章第一段最后一句陈述自己的观点，同时自然地过渡到下一段。
(4)第二段作者分两点论述自己的观点，结构清晰，论点分明。
(5)get used to意为“习惯于……”。
(6)so that意为“以便”，表示目的。
(7)In one word意为“总之”，用于引出结论，一般用于文章最后一段。
闪光词汇
be fascinated to 沉醉于
Get used to 习惯于
not…but… 不是……而是……
Undermine   v.破坏
in one word 总之
万能句型
Some people worry  that… 一些人担心……