Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Application for a Student Loan. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是高鹏,是英语系的一名新生。请你就申请助学贷款一事给学校有关部门写封申请信。申请信的内容须包括以下几点:
1.提出申请
2.申请的理由
3.恳请批准
A Letter of Application for a Student Loan
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答案解析
【审题】本题要求写一封申请信。根据提纲要求,本文应包括以下内容:简要介绍自己;详述贷款原由;表达期望与决心。注意详述贷款理由要充分,由此才能体现出申请贷款的必要性;表达期望时要语气得当。
【思路一】第一段简要介绍自己并提出此申请信的目的:申请助学贷款;
第二段详述家庭经济状况:母亲下岗,奶奶病重,弟弟读书,父亲是唯一养家糊口的人;
第三段表达自己的期望与决心:希望申请得到批准,承诺自己会勤工俭学,按时还款。
【范文一】
A Letter 0f Application for a Student Loan
October l4,2008
(1)To whom it may concern,(2)I am writing you to apply for a student loan.(3)As a freshman from English Department,(4)I have much financial difficulty in continuing my study.
(5)There are five members in my family.(5)My father is the only(6)breadwinner of the whole family while my mother was laid off two years ago.(5)My grandmother has been(7)suffering a chronic illness for more than five years.(5)My younger brother is now studying in a high sch001.I took part time jobs during the summer vacation,(8)but what l have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees.In order to continue my study,I