【写作思路】
本文是对商务报告的考查，内容要求是根据关于对两种品牌录像机市场调查的结果，写一份提升产品质量和市场份额的报告。
内容方面，根据题目所提供的表格信息，主要从两种品牌录像机的价值、可靠性、售后服务、有效性、广告投入等方面进行分析，找产品之问的差距，最后提出合理化建议。文章的结构方面要按照
商务报告的写作方式，措辞要有理有据，分析要鞭辟入里，建议要合理。
【参考范文】
Report
The results of the market surveys are unsatisfacto- ry. Therefore effective measures must be taken imme- diately.
Findings
From the table shown, it can be concluded that our efforts  in  such  fields  as  " Value  for  Money ","Refiability", "After-sales Service" and "Advertising" are less successful than those of Shikei.
Recommendations
On the basis of the results, I have the followingrecommendations :
To organize quality circles to study and supervise every sector in our production so that any quality problems can be discussed and solved in the course of production.
To give the marketing manager more power to make his own decisions so that he can respond to the changing business situation more more promptly.