简答题
中级
2014-03-17
Your company requires a taxi firm that could use on a regular basis for staff and clients. Your secretary has selected two advertisements from the local newspaper.
· Look at the advertisements below, on which you have already made some handwrittennotes.
· Then, using all your notes. Write a proposal for your line manager, saying which firm you think your company should use.
· Write 120-140 words.
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答案解析
【写作思路】
本文是对商务建议书的考查，内容要求是秘书根据两则出租车广告内容给自己的经理建议选择哪家公司。
内容方面，文章要强调最终给出的建议。
TELECARS公司的特点在于第1、2和3，STREETLIGHT CABS公司的却有着没有参考记录、没有网络定车服务、不方便等缺点。形式方面，商务建议书与商务报告大体一致，但差别在于前者用建议(Recommendation)代替了后者的结论(Conclusion)。
【参考范文】
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to assess and recommend a taxi firm that will become our transporter．We will need them especially during next year’s trade fair and conferences．There are two firms to assess.
Findings
We have found good references regarding Tele-cars. Besides having a long-running tradition of being very reliable, they also provide 24-hour service which will be very useful for meetings and negotiations held at night.
Streetlight Cabs, however, is a brand new company without references. They do provide cheap prices for long distance routes we often use, but as they do not have a web page, internet booking is not possible.
Recommendation:
I recommend choosing Telecars because of their long tradition of reliability and well trained staff.
本文是对商务建议书的考查，内容要求是秘书根据两则出租车广告内容给自己的经理建议选择哪家公司。
内容方面，文章要强调最终给出的建议。
TELECARS公司的特点在于第1、2和3，STREETLIGHT CABS公司的却有着没有参考记录、没有网络定车服务、不方便等缺点。形式方面，商务建议书与商务报告大体一致，但差别在于前者用建议(Recommendation)代替了后者的结论(Conclusion)。
【参考范文】
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to assess and recommend a taxi firm that will become our transporter．We will need them especially during next year’s trade fair and conferences．There are two firms to assess.
Findings
We have found good references regarding Tele-cars. Besides having a long-running tradition of being very reliable, they also provide 24-hour service which will be very useful for meetings and negotiations held at night.
Streetlight Cabs, however, is a brand new company without references. They do provide cheap prices for long distance routes we often use, but as they do not have a web page, internet booking is not possible.
Recommendation:
I recommend choosing Telecars because of their long tradition of reliability and well trained staff.